Reasons to Hate the Sky, Stuart Bartow, WordTech Editions, 2008, $18

Finding questions, weโ€™re told, is the beginning of wisdom. Each of these collections poses elusive questions whose answers, embedded in the asking, form the basis of eloquent poems.

Stuart Bartow is a nature poet in the tradition of Jack Gilbert, a transcendentalist a la Emerson, a romantic (think Wordsworth), but his work is playful, whimsical, and surprising, uniquely Bartow. In โ€œLike Donne or Dickinson,โ€ he addresses us: โ€œAt the instant youโ€™re perishing, life flares.โ€ฆ An irresistible magnetic / field has caught your trajectory / where youโ€™ll split / to infinity, between egg / and sperm, returning / to the restless stars, where you were drifting all along.โ€

In Reasons to Hate the Sky, Bartow is drawn skyward, where his philosophical, environmental poetry breathes freely. Not the birdwatcher hunting rarities, he joys in the common: The goose (โ€œAs I surfaced to their clattering, their vexed / ascent over the stairways of airโ€), the owl (โ€œAroused by dusk, mole hunger, they rose / like great mothsโ€), the crow (โ€œa nightmare of black leaves / something afloat in a cold, white seaโ€).

In poems both formal and free, the universe emerges as a living organism, gorgeous, mysterious, and deadly. โ€œThe call growing more subtle, / more coy, more dangerous / as it dimmed softer and softer / to the verge where language ends.โ€ Tossing a starfish back into the water, the speaker realizes lifeโ€™s fragility. โ€œWhat love is keeping my life spared?โ€ he asks.

โ€œWe knew who we were back then,โ€ begins Joan I. Siegelโ€™s Hyacinth for the Soulโ€”and I found myself sitting beside her on the stoop, โ€œsnugโ€ in my โ€œsquare-toed socks.โ€ Siegel, professor emeritus at SUNY/Orange, offers a collection of sensual, compassionate, and highly individual poems. โ€œAs though darkness were a hand, / a tactile memory / like playing the piano. You touch lost things.โ€ These lost things include childish fears (โ€œblack holes that could vacuum us / up like a pair of socks.โ€), joys (โ€œyou and your sisterโ€ฆ comfortable as animals in each otherโ€™s smell,โ€) and puzzles (โ€œHow the veins / of the lamb on your plate looked / just like the veins in your wrist.โ€)

The details of everyday life filtered through memory become mysterious. Her father, โ€œdark as rain on black umbrellasโ€ in a photo taken before her birth, will later ask his wife, โ€œWho are you?โ€ In these lovely poems, Siegel meditates on her experiences and thus allows us to see ourselves.

William Seaton, the Hudson Valleyโ€™s own bricoleur, turns his hand to whatever falls beneath his gaze. A kind of literary Alexander Calder, forever tinkering with wire and weight, Seaton is captivated by everyday encounters: new-cut grass (โ€œa million decapitations, the luxury of lying in spilt juicesโ€); the โ€œmanic flashโ€ of frantic winter flies; comic-strip characters (โ€œWhat marvelous coiffure my Nancy has?โ€). Heโ€™s equally at home in the exotic: โ€œPiledriver sun stamps a goldfoil nimbus about the brows / of shoeless bootblacksโ€ in โ€œGuayamusโ€; and in โ€œBush Path,โ€ the sheen of fairytale: โ€œHe hung the parcel under dripping fronds, / and off a silent hippopotamus / slid and glided on with radiant wake.โ€

Seatonโ€™s Spoor of Desire, selected poems from his 40-year writing career, offers a range of material, including formal rhymed verse, found poems, and contemporary myth. His intention, like that of Montaigne four centuries ago, is to offer โ€œmy selfe fully and naked,โ€ his goal to investigate โ€œIn what way is it becoming for one to live?โ€ An important question.

Reasons to Hate the Sky, Stuart Bartow, WordTech Editions, 2008, $18
Hyacinth for the Soul, Joan I. Siegel, Deerbrook Editions 2009, $16.95
Spoor of Desire: Selected Poems, William Seaton, FootHills Publishing 2008, $16

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